#2
You're playing wasn't bad, though your tone made it almost impossible to listen to.
#3
You should use less tremble in your amp, it makes it sound very noisy - you'll tell me that's what punk's about!
And you're too uptight - you'll tell me that's what greenday - at least old - is about!

Nice try though. Please check my East Jesus Cover...
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hCoMJ8a4ob4