hi mate nice work!
the first thing i thought was you sound like nirvana but thats not really a bad thing, i think the vocals really help carry the emotion of the song, the bass line is a bit boring for most of the song which kinda made the the chorus and solo seem a bit hollow - maybe some octaves and quick runs would help to fill out the trebly, scratchy guitar (which i quite like)

I like the overall quality (of the sound) and i honestly dont have any criticism that i could put in words.
backing vocals fit well but possibly slightly underutilised.
thats about it hope this helps.
cheers, mick.
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