#1
On this starless morning rise,

I see the sun drift slowly into the sky,

as the realization dawns upon the night

that it's time to sleep a dreamless sleep has come.

And as the night once did before,

I watch as the sun comes to life before my eyes,

rejoicing in the absurdity of it's own light,

unaware of the impermanence of it's life.

The stars would sit and watch the wonder,

wishing upon themselves to see the time

that they might be blessed with an ease of burden;

To join us in our forever slumber.
#4
crit the likes of UncleRemus, vintagexmetal, rushmore, etc. anyone who ends up nominated for wotm and wotw
there's a small pocket of regulars here who will give you good crits.
I want Super Saiyan abilities