#1
Hey guys iv recorded 3 songs now i was wondering if u watch any one of them and give me some feedback. The is a range in the style of music but i should say there is no heavy metal.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dXJ494zeSow = Finding the way home
(This is quite a happy song )

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dWYzs2gMgPA&feature=related = Death in the rain
(This is a dark song which is quite suspenseful and dramatic, even features thunder at one point haha)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Qsd3t096rGI&feature=related = Deep Blue
(This is my favorite song and the one i spent the most time on. It is a very calm and relaxing song and lovely to just mellow out to)

Hope you guys like and again if you could give me comments on how to improve all criticisms will be happily accepted
#2
Loved the Deep Blue one, all of them are fantastic!

The first one has potential, but it sounded somewhat empty, the second was brilliant, great suspense and I'd like to see perhaps that leading on to another song or even part of that one.

Either way, great work
I love Prog, +1 for synth solos and songs about maggie thatcher.


Gear:

Geddy Lee Jazz (Black )
Fender Rumble 100 (It lights up )
MXR Auto-Wah (Purple... )
Boss Bass Overdrive (I can almsot sound like Chris Wolstenholme )
#3
hey thanks alot the word fantastic means soooooo much to me thank you

i think id agree with u about the first one but i couldnt rly decide on what would go well over it, i initially had a quiet little keyboard part but then it didnt fit to well after i added the high guitar melody, but if u have ay ideas about what i could add it would be a massive help

Also i agree with u on the second one but at the moment i have no idea how to continue it lol, do you think adding parts before the lighting bit would work cause at the moment i dont really know how to add to it ?

anyway again thank you for saying they are fatastic and brilliant :P hehe do you have any songs i can review ?
#4
Hi there
I love the Deep Blue song :-) Such a beautiful piece of music !
Relaxing and great atmosphere,good work ! Commented on your Youtube as well.
Thanks for sharing.