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I recorded this on a cheap condenser through Audacity Beta 1.4. It's scrappy, that's for sure. Unfinished, but the foundation for the song is there.

I'm also looking for some lyrical critique (I have a similar thread on the SW/L forums) so that'd be nice too.

Also, I believe this is my first posting in this section of the forums.

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Since you've gone now
now you got rid of me
you dyed your hair brown
does blond remind you of me?
In my heart I got a tatoo
in the place you left it in
I'd love to kiss you now
and put out a cig on your lips

Round December time room begins to spin
I put a burn in my throat because you're a sycophant
find tools to treat you
or f*ck you or whatever else

Since you've gone now
you got no one else - pain
you can't drive
but you'll get on alone
Septemeber time you think your
getting older
you can't seem to get it in your head
that you got colder
GEAR
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