Not bad for a first take. As you mentioned, there were a few mistakes, but that's ok. Would've been nice if you'd gotten to the upper register a little bit sooner. I kept wanting you to play up higher on the neck sooner, but you eventually got there.

Good job. Keep at it.
that was very cool man!! at least the first 2 minutes were very cool then it falls a little, some out of tune notes and bends, but then u recover again with some cool licks, id say you have to work on doing longer bend notes and doing more vibrato. but overall as i said it was very cool, congratulations!

oh and add some delay or reverb to get a fatter tone (more gilmourish)

id be glad if you commented on my thread