#2
you need to dial back the distortion quite a bit. some good ideas were lost in a sea of mush. you seemed to have a cool epic sounding idea but as mentioned it was to distorted and that obscured some nice playing. your lead work needs more practice though. there seemed to be a lot of volume peaks and sweels when you play fast that doesn't sound very good. still a promising effort keep up the good work.

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