on my profile i have a few songs and would love feedback on any of them but my newest is "all these people in which i must kill" and I know its long but it would be greatly apprisiated if i got some feed back thanks a ton im totally cool with tit for tat so if you have music ill give it a listen
Well, I didn't listen to the whole thing, cause, honestly, 7 minutes is just way to long unless it got a tone of different changes in it. It wasn't bad, it's just too repetitive for the length of the song. I would try to shorten it up by at least 3 or 4 minutes. The tone was pretty good, you desperately need a bass guitar in there though, was super thin, and would prolly help you get a more punchy tone.

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