#1
Hey

Heres a piece ive been working on to go with a concept album ive been planning, and its the final track. Ive decided to work backwards,w hich im unsure whether its clever or silly, but whatever. But yeah, I hope for this to be a pretty emotionally driven song, which is why it remains pretty simplistic and minimilist, as Im hoping that the vocals will be the main part of the song, so I try to make a nice, but non destracting backing track Im also pretty happy with the strings.

Thanks
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The Moon's Tears.gp5
#2
I like it, but I think the intro lasts too long. I don't think it varies enough to justify its length. Try either shortening it, or adding another part, for example piano or another guitar playing the same chords in different positions.