intro seems like a ripoff of periphery, how it does the intro an octave high and then goes djenty. how is it "different" its like all other djent. its a good start though.
This is basically Icarus Lives, but not as much groovy. The added melody was nice, but it sounds a lot like the break from IL. And, aside from that, it's very derivative. It's a very typical melody done in a not very different way.

Don't get me wrong, it's not bad, it's just not... "different" like you said it was. Very typical.