#2
hey that keyboard intro is awesome - love the production / mix, sounds really fresh and vibrant - the songwriting is pretty creative to - some cool warped sounds in there and a cool piano melody - I really like this one! sounds like a mix of Dream Theater, Pink Floyd and Sonata Arctica with a bit of Evergrey thrown in!
#3
I looked at your "Greys" instrumental. I really enjoyed the first minute of it with the piano, thought it was really nice and it flows very nicely. When it got into the Heavier part at 1:10 I didn't like the change, It sounded too messy and unpleasant to me, However once it hit 1:25 roughly with the calmer guitar and steady beat I enjoyed it.

Overall I liked most of it, just the really heavy parts which put me off. This might just be down to personal though.
#4
the piano intro was awesome and left me trying to anticipate what was going to come next. It wasnt what i expected, but it was a little loud sounding overall. more specifically i think the cymbols might have been too loud in the mix but i also just mean it in a generally loud sort of way. after that it settled in nicely and i really liked the guitar solo that started around 3:09. its a cool little melody and i liked the tone too. it was a nice touch to bring the piano back in after than and everything from that point flowed really nicely i think.

heres a link to my new song if you want to give it a look
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1445514
#5
Really enjoyed it It reminded me of Dream Theater and Pink Floyd, interesting progression and good sound. Well, there was no part, I didn't like Maybe it could use some vocals, though it's good without them too. Keep it up
#6
I loved the track but i thought the intro maybe went on a tiny bit too long but thats just down to personal preferance. Overall theres nothing that i could really fault, the playing and mixing was bang on, the creativity and progression of the track left me expecting more. Awesome stuff.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=27276065#post27276065

Thanks!
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