#1
What's happening here i do not know
But where did all the passion go?
Everybodys just iin for the money
But whats money gonna buy when you got it all
I do not know what's happening anymore
Is it me or is everyone going mad?

Why do you sing that song with no emotion?
why don't you care what it means?
Why do you sing that song with no emotion?
why don't you care what it means?
What's happening here?

Not long ago the passion all died out
All they care about is that there payed
All that's on there mind is wheres my money?
But whats money gonna buy when you got it all
I do not know what's happening anymore
Is it me or has everyone lost it?

Why do you sing that song with no emotion?
why don't you care what it means?
Why do you sing that song with no emotion?
why don't you care what it means?
What's happening here?

Why do you sing that song with no emotion?
why don't you care what it means?
Why do you sing that song with no emotion?
why don't you care what it means?
What's happening here?


I wrote that awhile ago and just found it... I could use some work... any suggestions?
#2
Some new verses?
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JS30DKT Dinky Hardtail
Johnson Power 10
DS-1
Ashton Starter pack thingy (Acoustic)
Jim Dunlop picks
Wedge Picks
#3
I don't know dude. If I'm being honest I didn't enjoy it. But hell if I was your age I'd probably be writing the same song. I'd read some other people's work on here if I were you. It might inspire you or give you some new ideas. Good luck.

P.S. Check out your grammar, spelling, there/their/they're et cetera. It is nice to know, and good for the rest of your school years.
Last edited by Jordan89R at May 26, 2011,