#1
Hey everyone! I'm new to the forum, so be nice Any thoughts would be appreciated@

I'm Not Bad, I'm Just Drawn That Way

Looks like your running out of places to hide
words caught in your throat
like you were buried alive

Three days, three months, three years
it's all the same
when you play the game, just
Don't pass go, don't let go
you will never know
But maybe you will start to realize.

How do you cross the line from the other side?
Pick yourself up when you start to fly?
The answers are hard find with your eyes closed
and your hands behind your back.

Hurry, quick, to the back of the line
forever's almost over
and we are running out of time.

Your words, my voice, your tears
its all a waste of time
Oh well just nevermind, and
don't pass go, don't let go
you will never know
But maybe you will start to realize.

fin.

So anyway, the question part of the song is supposed to be the chorus and the passing go part like a pre chorus/build up. I think it will be kind of a pop punkish kinda of song, I'm still working on the music, but input would be appreciated!
#2
kinda confusing, dont really understand what it is youre trying to say here. that being said, i guess sometimes you dont really need a point

i like the line "How do you cross the line from the other side?" because to me, the question ends up "why are you crossing the line at all?" since it seems implied that the line has already been crossed. even if it doesn't mean that, its just a cool phrase