#1
Hey its in my profile.
I hope you enjoy it, its only short but i will be adding to it. Im looking for and ideas you might have where i could improve on my playing or composing.

Thank you!
Gear:

Charvel So-Cal Style 1 HH
Jackson Pro Series RR24M
Dean Dave Mustaine Signature VMNT

JCM 2000 TSL 100
#2
Nice playing, I liked the beginning, very in-your-face. The rhythm guitar is way too low in the mix, it makes some of the parts sound thin and less powerful than they should. I liked the melodies, but the harmonies are a bit too cliche for my tastes. To be honest, it sounds more than a display of technical ability than a proper song. You've definitely got some chops, though, I'll give you that.
#3
Well it's great song. I really dig the leads you have going and that solo. However,

Are your rhythms double tracked? It's sounds like they are in places, but in others, I can only hear a rhythm out of one speaker and not the other. The panning is kind of awkward.

The big thing though, is there seems to be a lot of frequencies at the same volume which is making it a bit muddy.

I like the composition overall. I don't really have any complaints about the song itself. In my opinion though, panning and EQ is holding this tune back from it's true potential.
#4
Nice playing. The first few seconds sound exactly like the solo to Leper Messiah though