#2
I like it. It's catchy and avoids some of the cliches that can be easy to fall into.
However for some improvements to work on, it feels like I'm waiting for a drop that never comes. It kinds of leads to a climax that never delivers if that makes sense.

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#3
I could only come up with one kinda cool dubstep drop, and i used it twice lol. but iv only heard skrillex so its kinda hard to figure out something in my head idk really....