#2
Pretty good. The vocals seemed like they get drowned out a bit. Should try to pull them up front a bit more since they are supposed to be the shining star in most of this. As well, not a big fan of the "clean echoed" guitar tone. It seemed dry and lacking fullness.

All in all, it's not bad. Good work.

If you get a chance, https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1444522