This is spoken word I guess. I was thinking about Pianos Become the Teeth progressions when I wrote this. Im just trying to put something on the paper. I know its short and the rhyme scheme makes it sound really amature.(Maybe because I am an amature. ) Oh well. C4C

Dead men talk
through a live mans walk
But still we overlook.

With such duration
and anticipation
We too will help write the book.

Passed down through our bloodlines.
Many believe we still have time
too mend all our atrophies.

I demand a cure, Im still unsure
But, Im on my knees
I beg you please.
God, help me...

Tell me what you think. Thanks.
Why pluck just one string when you can...

Last edited by ledhead205 at May 28, 2011,