#2
The screaming tone was really good, you just have to work on your endurance. Like when you were pronunciating the words (more than 2-3 at a time without a breath) you could definitely hear the running out of breath, but that comes with practice and time. Sounds good though, definitely got something there.


I know this isn't exactly in the same ballpark, but if you wanna shoot me a crit that'd be cool

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1445754
#3
Quote by MaskedMurader23
The screaming tone was really good, you just have to work on your endurance. Like when you were pronunciating the words (more than 2-3 at a time without a breath) you could definitely hear the running out of breath, but that comes with practice and time. Sounds good though, definitely got something there.


I know this isn't exactly in the same ballpark, but if you wanna shoot me a crit that'd be cool

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1445754


yea thanks alot man i'll be sure to check it out im a guitar player as well
#4
WOW!!! Thats pretty impressive man. I'm liking the lows, and you have great tone for just a day, geez it took me months to get exhales down (Im not sure if your doing inhales or exhales truthfully)
#5
Quote by Thricerocks
WOW!!! Thats pretty impressive man. I'm liking the lows, and you have great tone for just a day, geez it took me months to get exhales down (Im not sure if your doing inhales or exhales truthfully)

i am doing exhales, and thanks alot man. everyone i show(local musicians i'm friends with) are all really impressed i guess i have found a new talent thanks again
#7
Quote by tsoun-net
Not bad, not bad. Your voice has a great tone that matches well the song.
You have to work on your breath now, you often sound out of breath. Maybe add a bit more of expression too, but for a first time I guess it was pretty cool.

yea i'm really trying to get the breathing part down. but thanks alot man!
#11
I thought that was wicked !
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Encore E6 Blaster Series (My First Guitar, Great to learn on)
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