#1
Heys guys, my band wrote a new song and I need to hear some feedback.

http://soundcloud.com/silver-gate/monoliths

Here it is, i tried to add some tapping parts, and sweeps. Although sometime it seems like the sweeps are a bit too difficult for me to handle.

Oh yeah by the way disregard the odd techno shit at the end.

Thanks and i will also C4C if you want.
#2
You did a pretty good job with the sweeping and tapping stuff man, that stuff's tricky so don't be too hard on yourself. I didn't hear many sour notes. I think a lot of it sounds a little out of place though, just sorta tossed into the riffs if you know what I mean. But if that's how you arranged it on purpose, then hell more power to you. After all, it's your song. I dug the half time feel at the end, you should have done more of that in the song. Overall good job.

c4c?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1446065
#3
We tried having songs with structure and what not, but its not really our style.

Thanks for the feedback