#2
Awesome!
Especially the kick-in.

If that is the sort of thing you spit out you should consider bottling it or something.
#3
Had a very "Dark Side of the Moon" Pink Floyd vibe to it

Until the kick-in at the end. Then it sounded more like All that Remains

They were both awesome in their own regard but I just couldn't picture them together in the same song man.

I am impressed that you have an ear for these two vastly different emotions. You should separate them and build two songs out of them!
#4
Very awesome song man! As mentioned before, the kick in was really cool! By the way, if you want a real drum track, I can hook you up with one!
#5
Thanks guys! Never had responses as positive as these before :P

The parts are now split and I will work them further into two tracks.

Thanks again!
Member of the 7-String + ERG Legion.
#6
I really like this first part. I like the change a lot also. How it catches by surprise. Although I would keep it as one track because I think the change is cool! There maybe be a bit to much delay in the first part and the snare a bit thin in the last part.

If your still doing C4C.... https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1446549