#1
Posted this in Songwriting & Lyrics and realized it was in the wrong place.

Before people ask, this is a Sibelius file of the song, the whole song should be recorded in the next couple of months.

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/naw2/

It is the first song in the list and it is called '2AM' (as thats when the song was officially finished). I will take all critiques on it as long as they are constructive and I would like to know if the structure of the song makes sense?

Thanks in advance
#2
Quote by naw2
Posted this in Songwriting & Lyrics and realized it was in the wrong place.

Before people ask, this is a Sibelius file of the song, the whole song should be recorded in the next couple of months.

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/naw2/

It is the first song in the list and it is called '2AM' (as thats when the song was officially finished). I will take all critiques on it as long as they are constructive and I would like to know if the structure of the song makes sense?

Thanks in advance



Around 40 seconds is when it really gets interesting. Like the bass and guitar parts here, with all the space provided by the drums (or metronome type thing).

I like the overall structure, though I feel it´s hard to give good feedback without the lyrics and an actual recording. Please PM me when you do record it, as I would really like to here it.

My only knock against it is that it starts to drag on a bit towards the end.

Good job!