#2
Check your fretting hand pressure, make sure for the lead work your not fretting too hard, will help you to gain even more speed when needed and you wont get any unintentional string bending.

looks like your pressing very light tho, check your picking hand as well, make sure not to show much of your pick at all, I show around 2 - 3 mm max.

apart from that, theres not really much to be said, its just mostly riffing, stuff seems well memorized and everything appears ok
#4
You know it would probably help to know which of the two people in the vid you are.
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#6
Play less boring songs.
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