#1
Ok,as a member of this forum I need to open topic. Hope my song doesn't suck.

Lyrics:

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Edit: I think I have some grammar mistakes,but forgive me,I don't speak english very well
Last edited by Saint_Zg at Aug 9, 2011,
#4
Its pretty standard and I liked most of it. The second lines in the verses:
When you look at the mirror and see old face again
Thinking about you all the time,reminding things from past

These two are real wierd but I'll attribute that to your poor english :P.

Well done mate.

crit mine?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1448495