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Okay, so I've wrote a song that my band will be performing and I'm 100% on everything about it apart from the lyrics which i keep editing.
So these are what I've ended with, I was just wondering what you guys thought.
If you have any suggestions about how they could be improved then I'd love to hear/read them.
Or if you have any comments on the lyrics don't hesitate to let me know, criticism or any good points will be appreciated, thanks
Also - If you could think of a suitable title and leave it in the comments that would be awesome, as I seem to lack the ability to title songs D: Thanks

[Verse 1]

Don't ever be told to just drop it
never let them say "you'll never make it here"
we all know it things like this, make you wish
you could just start all over again
everyone seems to push you to the bottom
it's about time, you got to the top.
It's hard when you're a no one
sometimes, you just need a break

[Chorus]

Take all your fears,
put them on hold
They say there's nothing
like going down trying
Take every chance you can
before you get old,
cause you know, you're not the worst

[Verse 2]

Break away from all the limits you carried
we all know they just hold you back
We've seen every one of your dreams,
Plus we know you too well
so don't come telling us that you can't
keep a tight hold onto yourself
never let them change that
have your heart in your hand
because that way, you can always show it

[Chorus]

Take all your fears,
put them on hold
They say there's nothing
like going down trying
Take every chance you can
before you get old,
cause you know, you're not the worst

[Bridge]

So take all your fears,
Put them on hold,
Take every chance you can
Before you grow old
So take all your fears,
Put them on hold,
Because everyone knows,
you're not the worst

[Chorus]

Take all your fears,
put them on hold
They say there's nothing
like going down trying
Take every chance you can
before you get old,
cause you know, you're not the worst
Last edited by chuckyno1 at Jun 2, 2011,