#1
Why not, one shot
What do you got to lose
Giving my heart a bruise
Leaving me with the blues
Leaving me so confuse

Let me turn you on girl
But you keep shutting me down
Let me turn you on girl
But keep turning me down
Let me turn you on girl
But you keep blowing me off
Let me turn you on girl
But you won’t give me a shot

Why not, one shot
Why can’t I have a chance
We could go for a dance
Why are you so against
Why can’t we have romance

Just give me one chance, one shot
One chance, one shot
Just give me one chance, one shot
One chance, one shot
Just give me one chance, one shot
One chance, one shot
Just give me one chance, one shot
One chance, one shot

Let me turn you on girl
But you keep shutting me down
Let me turn you on girl
But keep turning me down
Let me turn you on girl
But you keep blowing me off
Let me turn you on girl
But you won’t give me a shot

This songs not suppose to be insanely deep or anything, i know. Also the bridge between the 2nd verse and the final chorus is meant to like increase with intensity and after each line to almost a frantic yelling. Or that's how I imagine it. Just thought I'd let you know how I thought it should go. So any idea/input/criticism/praise would be appreciated. Thanks
#2
it would be cool, only if it was really fast, because four minutes or more of similar lines could get old for some.

so make it fast!

and maybe end it with and "i'll shoot up your face (with all sortsa love...)"
"Hey kid. You wanna cigarette?"


"No thanks! I/m already hooked on Fonicks!"

#3
yeah its not gonna be a long song, and lol maybe on a special edition