#1
this isn't meant to be a song or even melodic,but it's just something out of the box i'm experimenting with(in a buckethead approach sorta way)so keep an open mind.It's in my profile,either crit here or in the profile itself...
#2
Super clean man as always

You've got grade A chops and an ear for many different kinds of music

I know you didn't intend it to be a "song" but just for reference The dance beat and the licks didn't agree with eachother at all. You could actually build something out of this idea, but you would need to layer some serious effects on your guitar to make it fit.