#1
Hey everyone, this is only the first half to my bands next song, I'm the guitarist, but, I laid down the vocal line for the chorus (the rest is instrumental) so, I was really hoping to get critiques on the vocals themselves (1:28 to 1:52)

I was going for more of a Darkest Hour style, vocally anyway, the rest of the song is...well a mixture of a shitload of other bands. Anyway, I'll c4c whatever you got.

http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/MattAnderson111/music/all/play1006112
Poop.


Yes, poop.
#2
Matt,
Definitely not poop. This reminds me a little bit of Primus towards the start. I can't say I'm wild about the vocals, but I like the vocals more than your basic death metal screaming. Instrumentally, I think it sounds quite good! Guitar playing is pretty tight. Interesting melodies. Good recording overall. Please review my music at this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1446711