#1
Fresh out of the recording oven, maybe a bit too fresh, oh well. I don't have any idea what kind of style I was going for, so I just mixed a bunch in. I actually made a video of me playing this on, so you can laugh at my goofy playing style and my spare tire of a belly.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WeGOvxZ-Nus

If you don't want to see my ugly mug, you can go to this link instead: http://profile.ultimate-guitar.com/ethan_hanus/music/all/play1006182



Leave a link and I'll crit yours.
#3
I like your rhythm tone. The track overall I found very AC/DC sounding. Its a fun track and your picking technique is crazy man. It would sound killer with a solo and some vocals. Very very cool track.

Check mine out:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1447921
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#4
Quote by hitman_47
I like your rhythm tone. The track overall I found very AC/DC sounding. Its a fun track and your picking technique is crazy man. It would sound killer with a solo and some vocals. Very very cool track.

Check mine out:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1447921


My picking technique is crazy?

I might try and squeeze in a solo sometime later.
#5
I can't really find much to criticsize here. It all sounds on-point and very tight. Tone is great too. Overall, a catchy metal jam. I'll just echo what others said in that this song needs some vocals and a guitar solo.

If you could check out my track and let me know what you think, it'd be much appreciated.

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1448012

Thanks
#6
Quote by ethan_hanus
My picking technique is crazy?


I cant really do the fast picking on power chords which you seem to do very well. Really liked the rhythm on your track.
Quote by jpnyc
You are what they call a “rhythm guitarist”. While it's not as glamorous as playing lead you can still get laid. Especially if you can sing and play.




Beer is the solutions to the world's problems.

#7
Hey man, first of all, I really love your tone. Nice and snarky tight thrashy tones. really good stuff. As far as the song goes, maybe a bit cliche but still, with vocals and leads would be a great hard rocking song. It sounds a bit thrashy, actually. I liked the little change at the end, it's all very nice. your tone sounds like the tone i have in this song that i recorded. i love the bk painkiller great PU. anyways, here is my composition:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=27338504#post27338504
Last edited by Tame Impala at Jun 4, 2011,
#8
Quote by hitman_47
I cant really do the fast picking on power chords which you seem to do very well. Really liked the rhythm on your track.


Oh, I see, thanks man. I'm a strict rhythm guitarist, so I guess it comes with the territory.

^ Your track does have a similar tone, except mines a little bit more on the gainy side, and a bit looser gain, prolly cause the Valveking's not a very tight gain amp. Very cool though, I love my Painkiller, best money I ever spent, I love that signature BKP sparkle and bite.

Thanks for the crits guys