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Hey guys, I've got two instrumental recordings on my profile.

The first one (riff 1) was recorded badly with a micrphone attached to my pc, nearly complete.

The second one (riff 2) was recorded with a better microphone, but we played much worse.
The second one needs more done one it..but I would appreciate some points of view!

We have just started writing now.

The second I need most points of view, for example there's a clean pre-chorus, and I would like to know, from the outside listener if you think the tonality of the seperate things fit etc.

As I said, riff 2 needs more work done (we only started doing yesterday) and it's played quite badly, but any feedback, constructive criticism etc would be nice!
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