#1
So I came up with these lyrics and was wondering if they were any good.posting


Torn between love and hate
Can't live with my mind in this state
Somewhere someones decided my fate
to me it's nothing, i'm already to late

It may seem selfish and cruel
But to them your nothing, just a tool
your the kind and caring fool
living your life under there rule

Nobody else really cares
Unless it adds, to whats already there's


Thats what i've got so far, lmk if you think theyre any good
#2
The rhyming seems a bit forced, you don't need to rhyme every line
"[Bleach] is mostly water, and we are mostly water, therefore we are bleach"

I feel we should go to...

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