#1
These are some lyrics I wrote.
Im kind of a noob, so any feedback would be great!
Have a nice day !


You don't call me back
So I break my phone

Don't act like you don't see
That something is wrong

I've been self-centered and
I've been too proud

I whisper in a crowd
and when it's quiet I'm loud

My reflection is staring me dead in the eye
It's glaring like it's saying good bye
forever old friend
Good bye forever, Im gone.

I close my eyes at night
But I never really sleep

And I hope for future things
But I never dream

I don't think I'm normal
Though I may look that way

What goes on in my head
I might be ashamed to say

Tell all my friends that I'm doing fine
Functioning eyes sometimes hide a soul
that is blind
And that's alright by me

My reflection is staring me dead in the eye
And it's glaring like its saying good bye forever old friend
Good bye forever, I'm gone
#2
Try more symbolism.
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