#1
Still working on this, but can be considered finished for now
has a sort of BVB/Disturbed feel to it

This pre-apocalyptic plight
To find the source of light
Has turned our world
From what it should have been
Now we face the truth
That there is no use
When we know what we know
*When We Know What We Know*

This is the day when
The sky falls down around us
Death lurks at every corner
Knives fall from the sky
*Goodbye*
Now prepare to die

We try to save our souls
Before the dam explodes
One thread of string
From pain to suffering
We knew this was coming
There can't be a lie
You'll come to me, i'll start to cry
But this won't be our last goodbye

This is the day when
The sky falls down around us
Death lurks at every corner
Knives fall from the sky
*Goodbye*
Now prepare to die

These days are getting longer
The fights are getting shorter
And this need to survive
Takes the shit out of me
This message i am sending
I swear my life is ending
Theres no more use pretending
My heart is not mend*Ing*

Solo

This is the day when
The sky falls down around us
Death lurks at every corner
Knives fall from the sky
*Goodbye*
Now prepare to die
Last edited by 3OddOnes at Jun 7, 2011,
#2
its good. u made the music for this one?
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I write poetry
And it sucks.
#3
Did you mean "pre-apocalyptic"?
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#5
I found it rather cliche and boring. "Oh, death and destruction of mankind", I think the genre of metal has that subject pretty well covered. If you're going to say the same thing, at least say it differently.