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trippingiraffe,
I'm listening on small computer speakers, so I can't comment very well how the audio quality is. Pretty good for a first song! Singing & vocal melody sounds reasonably good. Guitar playing is good most of the time, could be tighter in some places. Sounds like real drums, most of the drumming sounds good. Wouldn't mind hearing some lead guitar about half way into the song. Pretty good overall. Please review my music on this link:

https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1446711