This is a live video of me and my bassist performing a song i wrote a while back. it's a bit rough and the volume isn't the best. please give me your feedback (constructive of course) and i shall do the same. thanks :}


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Last edited by omclovin at Jun 8, 2011,
With the audio quality as it is, it's not real easy to critique. Sometimes the singing sounds good, sometimes a bit pitchy. It seems like it has a good vocal melody. The guitar melodies seem good, and the playing seems pretty good, but it's a fairly echoey recording. I only heard the audience applaud for one nanosecond, but it seemed like you got a good reaction. It's fun to play in front of an audience when things go well, yes? I think you might get more responses with a home studio recording (with better audio quality). Please review my music at this link: