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Hey guys,

Ive been playing guitar for about 3 years now and am wanting to get really serious with it, so Ive been working on writing and recording my own material. In this video there are several discrepancies that I had to ever so amateurely edit out, so Im not concerned about those. What I really wanna know is what parts of my technique I need to work on and if you have any constructive criticisms Id love to hear em. Honestly, I know I suck in comparison to most of the people here, so you guys seem like the perfect candidates to critique.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=POtycOKzYIk

Oh, by the way, dont mention the shitty little attempted solo thing at the end. Its absolutely terrible :P
Last edited by meatball at Jun 6, 2011,