Okay, first thing's first. ALWAYS tune your guitar before you record. Always tune your guitar really, but before you record especially. An out of tune guitar can ruin even the best recordings. Your playing is pretty clean, it just sounds off because you're out of tune. I'd like to hear another version with you in tune!

Your singing is solid as well! You have good pitch accuracy and pretty good tone too.

Keep up the good work!

Winner of the 2011 Virginia Guitar Festival

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