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Shack,

Sounds good man. You picked a solid chord progression, and it suits your voice very well. Glad you have that dialed in - seems like many struggle. I don't have any real critique - the performance was great! I'm subscribing to your youtube, I hope to hear songs with more instruments from you soon!

c4c
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1449264