#2
Has a distinct dark mood right off the bat, hooked me in. You should keep the intro just the way it is!

The progression starting at :32 is great. Reminds me of something dream theater would do. Tight playing, lots of great ideas that work together. You should definitely invest more time into this track and come out with a full version of it man.

c4c
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1449264
#3
It is a good song, the intro in particular caught my interest.

My main issues with the song are at the 25 second mark and the 32 second mark.
At 25 seconds, the guitars overpower each other. It sounds all right, but I think it could use a bit of adjustment.
32 seconds had the transition, the timing of the chords seems off at points.

But on the plus side, that intro is amazing :p.
#5
Sounds great, very dark. Could become either a soundtrack piece (0.33 and onwards seems very soundtrack-ish to me), or maybe a song, though then it would require some sort of progression - either vocals coming in, or maybe some sort of "different" section, maybe a soft, clean part, or something like that.

Also, maybe some moody strings in the background would enhance the mood? Or some electronic-sounding keyboard-part to compliment the guitars.

C4C
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?p=27390208#post27390208
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1450213
#6
very nice song indeed.
is your fl studio the whole copy, or just the free demo on their website?
and if it is the whole copy, did u buy it or download it off a torrent or something?

i liked the composition, and i totally dig the fact that you play around with time signature and note lengths rather that staying steady in 4/4. very original!

the intro is perfect

care to check out my original composition?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1448361
#7
Quote by naybnbyuwn
very nice song indeed.
is your fl studio the whole copy, or just the free demo on their website?
and if it is the whole copy, did u buy it or download it off a torrent or something?

i liked the composition, and i totally dig the fact that you play around with time signature and note lengths rather that staying steady in 4/4. very original!

the intro is perfect

care to check out my original composition?
https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1448361


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#8
Very nice, I liked that.
Would be nice to see it developed into a full song I think. Would probably work best as an instrumental IMO.