It's nice but it feels a bit empty until about :21 it feels like there isn't enough low end. Try messing with the eq a bit, and while it never gets boring or repetative, it did end very abruptly. All in all, it's an interesting approach to electronica(and I'm a big fan ) and I'd like to hear the final version when its done.

c4c? https://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/showthread.php?t=1445416
2/17/08 Kosova's independence!!!