#2
The music is great, but the melody writing and vocal performances ruin it for me.
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Motion City Soundtrack, Get Up Kids, Jimmy Eat World, Transit, Brand New, Dashboard Confessional, Early November, Fall Out Boy, Jawbreaker, Polar Bear Club, The Story So Far, the Wonder Years, Something Corporate.
#3
Yeah that's actually something we're working on. Especially in the New and Improved song. These are just rough recordings from an 8 track that were recorded in less then an hour so hopefully when we get some studio time in, we'll have everything pretty much nailed down. Thanks for checking it out though, but what about the melody seems off?
#4
Quote by Numerobofis
Yeah that's actually something we're working on. Especially in the New and Improved song. These are just rough recordings from an 8 track that were recorded in less then an hour so hopefully when we get some studio time in, we'll have everything pretty much nailed down. Thanks for checking it out though, but what about the melody seems off?


There was no hook that really grabbed me like one would hope for in pop punk songs, at least in choruses. The music is really, really solid but without an awesome vocal hook, the songs aren't very memorable.
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Motion City Soundtrack, Get Up Kids, Jimmy Eat World, Transit, Brand New, Dashboard Confessional, Early November, Fall Out Boy, Jawbreaker, Polar Bear Club, The Story So Far, the Wonder Years, Something Corporate.
Last edited by DiveRightIn63 at Jun 10, 2011,
#8
Quote by Blakeu224
What kind of 8-track are you using?


A Boss br 600. It's great for guitars and such but the mics are shit and we don't have the proper mics for drums or vocals but we make do as best as we can. Does it sound good in your opinion?