For the first 8 seconds, I would delete the guitar buzz noises. Vocals could use more treble. Vocals are sometimes pitchy, vocal melody is pretty good, I like it when you hit the higher notes. This reminds me of the Cure a bit (a compliment). I'm hearing occasional clipping or some sort of unwanted distortion at times. I like the guitar tones & the guitar playing! The drums & bass work fine. Song writing is good. I often do alternative music myself, please review my music at this link:

Last edited by aaron aardvark at Jun 8, 2011,