Upcoming track from a demo we've recording with a friend (D. Lawson). Using University studios.

Would like opinions.

Band is called Control Is Dead - www.facebook.com/cidband

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Last edited by Donkey Fly at Jun 7, 2011,
Donkey Fly,
If it were me, I think I'd start with only vocals, since they sound good, then start the guitar. A lot of different sonic things happening which I appreciate in this song. All the vocals are very good/very good audio quality! Lead guitar playing/solo is very good (I would have center-panned it). All the guitars sound good. At 3:20 the vocals are too loud. Overall, a very good song. I think it just needs a few tweaks to be radio ready. Please review my music at this link:

Last edited by aaron aardvark at Jun 8, 2011,
there is something not just right with the solo but thats me anyways the song is awesome
im sick with GAS