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Hello, these are the lyrics from a song I've just written and I'd like opinions!

C4C also

the lights are on
but no one's home
you'll hear it beat
but it's still stone

regretfully
we inform
the clouds will break
tonight's the storm

was it a heart attack or a broken back
that caused me to crack again

like passing ships
our paths did cross
you had direction
i was lost

and as we sailed
through winter frost
we both knew summer
was all but lost

was it a heart attack or a broken back
that caused me to crack again

the lights are on
the lights are on
the lights are on
the lights are on