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http://soundcloud.com/batruchf/not-a-star


Newest song. Crit as much as you can, (lyrics/recording quality/performance/song itself)

Will gladly look at any of your stuff in return

Cheers

Lyrics:

I;m holding onto ropes within your heart
And letting little hopes rip me apart
When everything that's gold is not a star
THen everything thats warm will disregard

I'm holding onto ropes and stars
And words we wish we kept as ours
We win we lose we break apart
With open eyes, oh we will see
The rain, the sun, the grass the trees
I set myself free to the breeze

I need a pen to stain this empty mind
And ill advised parade, a waste of time
I've given you a step, you needed nine
Is wishing for the warmth saying goodbye?

I'm holding onto ropes and stars
And words we wish we kept as ours
We win we lose we break apart
With open eyes, oh we will see
The rain, the sun, the grass the trees
I set myself free to the breeze

Ive build myself a home within new walls
And taken down the pictures in the halls
But in the attic underneath it all
A single silent picture sings a song

I'm holding onto ropes and stars
And words we wish we kept as ours
We win we lose we break apart
With open eyes, oh we will see
The rain, the sun, the grass the trees
I set myself free to the breeze
Quote by pengiunman
Hahaha you crack me up swansareroadkil.

:can't think of a smiley to put, your too cool:
Last edited by swansareroadkil at Jun 8, 2011,