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It's pretty decent for a single take, there was obviously a looooot of stuff done in separate takes on that song. What I would recommend is to do a lot more "ghost sliding" where you slide into the note really fast, especially on the lower heavy and double stop parts. Zakk does this a LOT (something I've picked up and gotten pretty comfortable with actually) and you can really hear it in his playing.

edit: Also make sure you're more confident with your bends. You were sounding pretty shaky as the solo started, but you finished strong and it sounded good.
Last edited by MaskedMurader23 at Jun 9, 2011,