#2
"Curl Up And Die":
I really like the vocals and the guitar rhythm. Could make the playing more tighter as there are some mistakes I catch here and there. I love the way the line "curl up and die" is whispered/said. Lyrics are interesting. It's a good song, but i'd say you should double track the acoustic. It'd give the song a more 'full' sound. Acoustic solo at 4:02 could have been played a bit better and maybe a tad more complex(?), but it sounds good for what it is. I also think that at the end with the acoustic, you should say "curl up and die" just like at 5:20 for the rest of the track. It would sound cool. Just a thought. Awesome song!

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#3
I like the guitar lines - could be played a bit tighter, but the riffs are great. Double-tracking would help a lot, I think.

Regarding the vocals, I like the melodies and the lyrics, but I think you should sing them more softly. Right now, the vocals sound a bit out of place, because they're all metally over the acoustic backing. Singing in a more "ballad"-y or pop-ish way would give the track a different vibe. Possibly there could be a progression - soft vocals throughout the track, then the grittier vocals come in at the end, or something like that. Some harmonies wouldn't hurt either.

C4C
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#4
BB,
As stated earlier, the guitar playing could be tighter at the intro (it gets better as the song plays, for the most part), but I like what your playing. Vocals remind me a bit of Kurt Cobain, though they are pitchy at times. Could use some polish, but the songwriting is good. Please review my music at this link:

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