i like what you did with the guitar parts. it sounds like its split up into 2 different parts? regardless, the quality of it sounds good. your vocals are solid too. good choice on the song, i never really thought to try to convert others over but listening to this got me thinking so i might have to experiment with some of these now too
How profesional are you trying to sound? I'd give that a 5/10 in all honesty. Guitars are muddy, vocals are pitchy, but the idea is clearly there and I like what you did with it. Keep it up!