blacknex
Tab Contributor
Join date: Jan 2010
218 IQ
#1
I want to show you, guys, my current project.

I consider it as traditional rock / (maybe glam?). (Mountain, Poison)

But it's currently unfinished.

Also I kinda need help with it. I need better drums and maybe solos.

Comment please Will C4C( Although I suck in it).

Thanks. :3
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Grave Robber
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Join date: Jun 2005
647 IQ
#2
Sounds good but could do with a slight rhythm change for the verse just to make things a bit more exciting
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mcorrea94
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Join date: Jul 2011
32 IQ
#3
I liked the bass part and also that guitar fills of the pre-chorus
I think it'll be better if you give the chorus more explosiveness more energy. Louders drums will do it or also a different chord progresion.
don't forget that these songs demand a very catchy vocal melody and good original solos so start thinking on that.
but the bottom idea is good keep working on that.
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Kinderrot
Join date: Dec 2008
350 IQ
#4
Perhaps instead of:
-7--7--7--7--7-----5\----7------------
-7--7--7--7--7-----5\----7-----------

You could try:
-5\7--7--7--7-----5\----7------------
-5\7--7--7--7-----5\----7-----------

Just to make it a tad more interesting...also, bear in mind what the bloke above me said about catchy vocals...they'll add a considerable amount of life to the song!

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