#1
Hiya :3
Adding to my list of intermittent short poems, this one is light hearted

I Think I am a mushroom
Growing in the dark, dank underground abyss
It's cosy here, there's lots to do
Like breathing oxygen and absorbing nutrients
Be careful if you pick me though
I am not all that I appear
For this soft shell hides a bitter heart of artichoke
I'm more like a pizza, really.


I thought it was pretty cute. Highlight below for the intended message :3
Crit welcome, I just hope it makes you smile
It's a short little poem about the importance of understanding people, they have more than one aspect to them :3
Music is an art form that celebrates potential. So long as you're looking for it, you'll always find it.
#4
Quote by leilalauren
Haha - So cute!! I love it! (cozy is spelled with a z though)

Australia uses UK conventions :P so it's Cosy here, we rarely use z's.
Music is an art form that celebrates potential. So long as you're looking for it, you'll always find it.
#5
loved it. Personally,
'For this soft shell hides a bitter heart of artichoke'
was my favorite line. The word play there was really nice.

I'm sorry this isn't a longer crit, or even a crit, really. I enjoyed this piece a lot, and i'll be looking out for more of you in the future.

Totally made me smile.