#2
whyd you make it 12/4 hahaha its an okay riff i give it maybe 6/10 its not that intresting but decent if u were more into the genre it would mean more i guess
#3
its cinda boring as it is right now , you should combine different notes ( 16th , 32th , etc ) more
other than that its ok , also try to work things out more before posting them here.

i changed your first bar to give an example.
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Swindle The Masses-1.gp5
Last edited by MobiuZ at Jun 14, 2011,